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Exo [Review]

Exo
by Fonda Lee
Scholastic, 2017
Of all the YA science fiction I’ve read so far (and keep in mind it hasn’t been a lot) Fonda Lee’s Exo is the only one I’d call true SF. That is, an out-there premise is given and the author extrapolates from it, showing us the effects it has on science, the environment, human society, and human relationships, all of which are worked seamlessly into the story so the panty lines of extrapolation do not show. It’s a tough order, and some YA authors choose not to do it, using robots, starships, and aliens as the Star Wars universe uses them… as elements of fantasy. Instead of doing this Lee demonstrates her worldbuilding logic continuously in the story, and in fact it helps shape the story.
The setting is about 100 years into the future, after Earth has been conquered by an alien race called the zhree. The zhree resemble stubby mushrooms walking on six tentacles, like a shorter, friendlier version of H. P. Lovecraft’s Elder Things. Their occupation of Earth came about because they needed an outpost against the Rii, a rival race. Naturally, humankind fought back, but lost because of the zhree’s superior weaponry. However, the zhree are more kindly colonizers than despots, and certain humans they choose adopt into their “tribe” as liaisons, diplomats, and peacekeepers for zhree rule. The chosen humans receive the alien exoskeleton that the zhree invented for their own soldiers which makes them faster, stronger, and more able to absorb damage. The exoskeletons are not rigid, but something like a thin, transparent web that flows over the wearer’s skin. The story gets going when one of the peacekeepers, a young man named Donovan, goes to arrest a group of human anti-alien terrorists and instead gets captured by them.
It’s Old School SF, and sufficiently complex not to bore me… in fact, it’s on the level of many older SF written for adults, like Rendezvous with Rama, for example. It’s something of a thriller as well, incorporating escapes, explosions, and battles, and a political potboiler, as the true nature of the relationship between the zhree and humankind is revealed, and how the terrorists’ goal of driving the zhree away means not liberation but danger for the entire planet.
Lee does an exemplary job of balancing out the opposing sides of human alien-collaborators and human alien-opposers, giving each member valid and logical motivations for doing what they do. Each side demonizes the other, but to the reader, there are no clear Good Guys and Bad Guys. To the story’s credit, Donovan does not switch allegiances after he is captured – that would be too facile. But his lines do blur a little, and he begins to see beyond his blinders, and after he discovers a shocking family secret, his allegiances get called into question.
The story kept me guessing about this even as I was sure he’d never betray his friends and father. Yet, he does eventually rebel, and the consequences are heartbreaking. I don’t want to reveal too much of it. It’s the rare book I want readers to discover on their own without me spoiling things. It would make a wonderful anime series, or a live-action one spread over several episodes, and this is the course I hope it takes.
There were neat touches everywhere in the book, like a festival performance — described by Donovan as “silly” — with a chorus of zhree younglings and human children singing together holding hands, and a flashback to Donovan’s implantation of his exoskeleton at age six. If I had a criticism, it would be that the chapters in the first part of the book, those dealing with Donovan’s internment, are too often ended with scene-wiping cliffhangers or explosions, and his attraction to a human girl who is one of the terrorists seems a little shoved in, though it’s the sort of thoughts a young, somewhat sheltered guy might have. Adolescence is for dreaming, after all. But again to the story’s credit, Donovan doesn’t run off with her or have a mad affair with her (as might happen in another author’s hands) and though she moves out of the action for the second half of the book, she certainly influences his thoughts and actions.
In short, recommended. There’s a sequel out too, and I will definitely be reading that.
Worldbuilding Wednesday 8/1/18: States of Confusion (Mid-Atlantic)

Future New York, according Matt Groening
Continuing my series of randomly generated names for fictional U.S. states that sound similar to the existing ones. This time, I’ll tackle the Mid-Atlantic states. Grand Theft Auto, from Rock Star Games, has been there before me, allowing players to be one of the bad guys stealing cars from “Aldernay” (New Jersey) and its urban area of New Guernsey. (On the West Coast, Los Santos, San Fierro, and La Ventura served the same function, subbing in for Los angeles, San Francisco, and Las Vegas, respectively.) What other states may have been up and down the Eastern Seaboard, full of Ferraris and Corvettes to steal?
Imaginary U.S. States, Mid-Atlantic Region
| NEW JERSEY
New Jellan New Selensay New Zymnsy New Jelensea New Saltsea New Sedgsey New Talsey |
NEW YORK
New Yorth New Gark New Orb New Lork New Thork Newbart Near Tors |
PENNSYLVANIA
Penbrynnia Sylvandelle Finsvania Penshania Penzurulia Hannalania Pennydonia |
| DELAWARE
Delawine Delawater Delamid Zelawara Deletabar Deladelphia Deliezare |
VIRGINIA
Virbenia Vorinia Virgaia Vigorica Virzinia Virgambra Virgonea |
MARYLAND
Monyland Manyfeather Mayfair Marasand Ruthyland Maryfast Maraeland |
Zombie Walk

Zombie Walk in Venice, 2016
Worldbuilding Wednesday 7/25/18: Clothing of Distinction

Making up things for characters to wear can be tedious sometimes, especially for a culture that has no earth analogue. Do we default to Medieval-normal (which wasn’t very normal at all), stick to the faux-Medieval we are most familiar with from endless movies and illustrations, or strike out on our own into new territory? Sometimes costumers strike a balance, like the Medieval-seeming-but-with-a-twist designs for the TV version of Game of Thrones; other times, they go hell bent for leather, like Paco Rabanne’s bizarre, never-again-repeated designs for the 1968 Barbarella, or Eiko Ishioka’s creations for The Fall and Mirror, Mirror.

Princess wearing a duck on her head… excuse me, swan… in Mirror, Mirror.
In SF and fantasy writing, the immortal Jack Vance always managed to clothe his protagonists in something bizarre, and Robert Silverberg as well, who portrayed a woman wearing a giant amoeba in his SF retelling of Heart of Darkness, Downward to the Earth.
If you want to strike a middle balance between plausible, historic, and memorable, here’s some (randomly generated) ideas.
Clothing of Distinction
Alligator hide clogs
Violet-dyed wool felt apron sewn with rough crystals
Knit wool shawl decorated with brightly colored pompoms
Tiger skin shoes
Red cuirass decorated with rough wooden disks
Emerald green dragon-scale loincloth
Woven tree bark shoes worn by youths under the age of ten
White wolfskin mittens sewn with freshwater pearls
Sheepskin headpiece decorated with eagle claws
Yak hair underwear
Indigo-dyed overskirt decorated with tiny silver bells
Green lambswool earmuffs with straps of gilded leather
Gray wool stockings sewn with old buttons
Dyed rabbit skin robe
Purple vest decorated with tiny silver bells and brightly colored tassels
Gilded leather slippers with lace insets
Velvet gauntlets decorated with baby shark teeth
Long orange kilt ornamented with copper beads and rough crystals
Snug snakeskin vest
Short felted wool tunic lined with satin
The Doll

The Doll threatened all by its very presence.
Worldbuilding Wednesday 7/18/18: Steampunk Jargon

I don’t know what this is. Maybe you do?

Or this?
One of the things that really makes Steampunk literature, and Victorian literature in general, is the use of odd English words to describe little odds and ends that need describing, like parts of machinery, personal items of clothing, genitalia, obscure occupations, and other fluff. Charles Dickens was a pioneer of these charming names, through his naming of characters like Martin Chuzzlewit.
Other names may have emerged from mistranslations. The Low London phrase batty-a-fang, meaning “to thrash thoroughly,” may have been an Anglicized version of the French battre a fin. Some were even literal, like gal-sneaker, which refers to a male seducer, and gas-pipes, mens’ trousers which were as narrow as the name suggests.
Writing Steampunk? Here’s some randomly generated terms to use in your own work or to inspire.
Steampunk Jargon
| Crutchgirdle
Manbliff Calicallow Dampslimmer Crampfluff Opera-rustler Trotskimmer Gasketat Sallygrieve Scrunchkin Bounce-naught Lips-a-swiggin Blosscorcher |
Mugbinder
Pointy-plums Stiff the keet Mudhider Pooky-noughts Puffside Sallyset Narrowpig Flaygrieve Crabboner Chastewaffler Trinky-stun Grooftsnug |
Dimpletang
Foleillion Wonder-primp Topwag Scleron Cinchgirdle Whystflum Maidfluff Wasp-gang Quillshag Gallbister Penny-kit Psalm-smoother |
Getting Ahead

Let’s get a-HEAD of ourselves with the Steampunk theme.
